I like the deck.  It is a good un-powered verison.  The main question I have is why use breeze over tendrils?  Looking at your list I guess would be the 2BB compared the 1U casting cost.  

I would diffintly add Mox diamond that is a good card but only 2.  You also need some draw 7.  Budget cards include windfall and Wheel.  Timetwister is good if you can afford it.

If you are willing to add some money now to the deck mana crpyt is a excellent choice.  Over all I would try and fit Tendrils over freeze as it kills with a storm count of only 9 compared to freezes count of 19  

Carl I am a member of TPOC= "The Power of Cheese" first off our name cam from a die roll.  I lost so my friend named our team  

We put two members in the top eight at the last SCG P9 in Richmond.  Before that we were not seen but we have only been a team, or working as one for the last 6 months.

Our team in includes
Ron
Van
Rocky
Chris / me

First names only as I dont trust the internet that much.  Though you can figure Rocky's and my name out by looking at the top eight from SCG.

We play once a week thats it.  Now that once is a about a 14 hour day but we all have jobs and a life so magic is only part of our life not the whole thing.

Ron is our $$ player he owns almost two full sets of power and workshops and bazaars and those high dollar cards.

Van owns none but he is the player that brings us together he sets it all up.

Rocky is new addition to our team as three was kind weak.  He owns one power I think.

Me I own 2 now since i just won one

Our team was not metioned on SCG as I told Rocky not to tell about us......yet.  Wanted to stay under the wire for a couple of weeks.  Since what the reports said.

If you want to know me more let me know.