I played your list yesterday at mr nice guy for the vintage CQ, and ended up 3-2. My only change was to swap 2 tormod's crypts in the side for 2 ravenous traps, and they won me at least one match/round. My losses were to grixis pyromancer and... *gasp* modern eldrazi + tombs . The pyromancer matches were fairly close but dack fayden going unchecked into an emblem was very bad news. The list definitely proved itself against shops and storm though, and void winnower was fantastic. The strip mine was also great.

The only card that never felt right all day was yawgmoth's will, given we no longer have vault/key.