In all honesty, I like the concept. However, I see several problems in execution:
Tangle Wire is essentially your main disruption, particularly for forcing the Oath through. That is inadequate, not to mension unsynergistic with Orchard. Your countermagic will not be very useful for getting Oath to stick: by the time you have (1)(G)(U)(U) open, I expect that a control opponent would have a counter ready, as well as Force backup.
I have trouble imagining you "out counter" control opponents, with only four in the deck and no Force.
Additionally, you have very few ways to search out Oath.
Lastly, about the mana base... Any 5 color Stax player is likely to tell you that City of Brass is far better than Gemstone Mine. Beyond that, in the current meta, even with the recent dip in Stax, Wasteland is a threat that you need to consider, and counter with fetch into basics, as you don't really want to rely on Crucible to keep lands on the board.
Overall I might begin by suggesting
-3 Mine
-4 Wire
-1 Crucible
-1 Bayou
-1 Trop
-1 Sea
-4 Mana Drain
+2 Island
+4 FOW
+8 fetch
+1 City
Good luck, and let me know how it ends up!
