I have a suggestion, and inevitably it will cost you more slots. But why don't you use 4x Dread Return, 1x Bladewing the Risen, 1x Bogarden Hellkite, 1x Bladewing's Thrall for the kill rather than the Sutured Ghoul/Lord of Extinction. Heres how it works: Sac Narco for Bladewing the Risen, Target Hellkite and return, Thrall will immediately follow suit allowing you repeat flashback on the Return to kill your opponent with 20 points of damage.
However I do have a side note, decks involving the graveyard such as dragon and your suggested deck, are extremely weakened by graveyard hate, (as i'm sure you know). Even though players use a core set of Yard killers (Leyline,Tormod's/Relic and Faerie Macabre) there is such a wide variety of hate your deck is still susceptible to in addition to the yard killers. Making this deck much easier to disrupt than others. Hate cards such as Chain of Vapor are currently maindecked. I'm curious do you have a plan for those other than Thoughtseize/Duress?

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