Congrats on the great finishes. I like seeing decks like this succeed. Truly vintage.
Try Mystic Remora instead of one of the bounces and two of the controls. They work well with the still and allow you to survive the early with even more effectiveness.
You'll find yourself with alot of draw. Maybe start sacrificing some of the critters/control pieces to get some more zero mana in there.
Hope this helps..
