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« on: July 28, 2004, 03:33:15 am » |
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Mind Leech 2U Creature - Leech ~this~'s power and toughness are each equal to the number of cards in target opponent's hand. Whenever ~this~ damages a player, that player may draw a card. */*
Obviously weaker than Maro but still potentially a turn 3 7/7 (or a 0/0!). The CC is 2 less than Entropic Specter because it hasn't got Flying or Discard, Blue should be more adept at dealing with intelligent opponents and giving opponents cards is a bad drawback (also one previously used in Blue).
Current wording Mind Leech 2U Creature - Leech As ~this~ comes into play, choose a target opponent ~this~'s power and toughness are each equal to the number of cards in target opponent's hand. Whenever ~this~ damages a player, that player may draw a card. */*
Changes Jebus- CIP choosing of target, improved wording
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« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2004, 05:43:26 am » |
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Shouldn't this have some form of evasion though? Right now, it's just really bad right?
edit: Shadow would be really flavorful, since essentialy, this card means that the opponents hand(cards) are attacking him! If that isn't 'shadowy', what is? :p
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« Reply #2 on: July 28, 2004, 08:25:40 am » |
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Didn't all of my threads used to start with people saying the card was too powerful and I had to water it down. I appear to have entered a parallel universe where my cards are considered too weak.
I'm fine with a card that could be a 7/7 for 3 mana.
Would you believe that second ability used to be this: 0: Target opponent may draw a card, if they do ~this~ gains Flying
Fair in duels but baaaaaaaaaaaaroken in multiplayer.
I actually thought people would bitch about the P/T so I didn't tag on any evasion. I guess I could modify that old ability so a player attacked may draw a card before blockers are declared but this is a bit 'fussy' and less likely to mean anything in a game.
Other options include allowing you to change the target, switch to an opponent with more cards or even switch to whoever you attack with this (and I guess block).
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« Reply #3 on: July 28, 2004, 11:27:57 am » |
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With the current wording, if you can find a way to have it damage yourself, you draw a card. I think that's worth preserving.
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« Reply #4 on: July 30, 2004, 12:36:31 am » |
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Good point, I think it would amuse a number of casual Blue players. I suspect most Constructed players might find other Blue cards that allow them to draw cards.
Like Wizards, I prefer to use the description 'skill-tester' rather than weak to describe a card that has the potential to be good but in 90% of games is less than stellar.
I was considering removing the 'may' from the card draw. On those rare occasions when your opponent doesn't want to draw, this creature could them force them to!! I suspect it would not raise the power level of this guy too much :wink:
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« Reply #5 on: August 02, 2004, 02:42:41 am » |
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« Reply #6 on: August 02, 2004, 08:18:39 am » |
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I'm having issues with your creature's CSA. You have a static ability that targets, but never a time that that target is picked.
You need something like "As ~this~ comes into play..." to get things going.
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« Reply #7 on: August 03, 2004, 12:35:47 am » |
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Change made...
Is that OK?
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« Reply #8 on: August 03, 2004, 08:29:21 am » |
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Change made...
Is that OK? Yes, but just noticed your second ability has an issue. "If" should be "Whenever". And "any" could be just "a".
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« Reply #9 on: August 04, 2004, 12:51:25 am » |
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Change made. Can I start the clock?
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« Reply #10 on: August 31, 2004, 12:56:23 pm » |
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Closed and added.[/color]
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