really poor mans dragon

[MSR9889]

this deck is set up with 4 proxies, seeing as how that is how many my local store uses. im looking for tips as far as what you think should be in or out of the deck. i have beaten decks like cerabral assain(barely, deathlong etc., oath, mono blue control(smmenen stile), and goblins(both FCG and not). im looking for tips on how to improve this deck under my limitted restrictions. i normally place 3rd or better, normally losing to the decks above. take a looksy...

4 dragon
3 squee
1 laquatus
1 caller of the claw(i have no queen)

4 duress
4 force of will
3 stifle(talk about a game winner)
2 compulsion
3 intuition
2 lim duls vault
1 DT and VT
1 crop rotation
4 animate dead
1 dance of the dead
2 necromancy

lotus(proxied)
mox diamond
mana crypt
sol ring
lotus petal
mana vault

3 bazaar(proxied)
4 underground sea
2 bayou
island
swamp
4 polluted delta
2 bloodstained mire

sb (needs work)

stifle
2 phyrexian furnace
3 xantid
3 gloom (for store metagame, otherwise blankspot)
2 sundering titan
3 pernicious deed
1 verdent (lookin for 2 more)

im open to any and all tips, but keep in mind, i have been beating fully powered decks. i am also considering kegs and now that i have them, explosives. please leave me feedback.

[kill doug]

is your deck only 4 proxy
Verbal warning for spam. This post is complete garbage.
-Jacob

[MSR9889]

yes, 4 proxie is how many the store uses. 3 bazaars and a lotus. im lucky to have the mana crypt, noe that i think about it. haha

[Jacob Orlove]

You need more than just a decklist and description of the metagame to start a thread. See the rules. Closed.