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« on: June 24, 2005, 05:50:51 pm » |
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Protective Herd - 3G Creature - Beast Sacrifice a creature: Return target creature you control to its owner's hand. 3/3
I'm not sure if the ability would be better as a protective bounce (which feels blue to me; I can only find it on 3 creatures, all blue) or a regeneration, which is very very blue. I just got some inspiration and I know the set needs some good aggressive creatures, especially for green.
Current wording: Protective Herd - 3G Creature - Beast Sacrifice a creature: Regenerate target Beast you control. 3/3 Fight one beast, fight the herd[/B]
Changes: 1) Changed to regenerate and has to target a Beast. Adopted Dandan's flavor text.
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« Reply #1 on: June 26, 2005, 09:57:09 pm » |
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This is really, really powerful. Compare to Ravenous Baloth - it gets -1/-1 in exchange for a MUCH stronger ability and a MUCH easier activation.
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« Reply #2 on: June 27, 2005, 01:22:51 am » |
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Change this to regenerating the creature, and make either the sacrifice or the target have to be a beast.
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« Reply #3 on: June 27, 2005, 10:02:58 am » |
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Making the target a beast but the sacrifice a non-beast is kind of cool. Like it's eating the little guy.
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« Reply #4 on: June 27, 2005, 02:42:42 pm » |
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I like the eating concept, but how does that explain a targeted ability at all? This beast teaches other beasts how to eat? Now, if this were an Elf Chef or something, it'd be perfect...
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« Reply #5 on: June 28, 2005, 08:18:53 am » |
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It provides a h'Elf service to others
Regenerate target beast looks fine to me
Fight one beast, fight the herd
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« Reply #6 on: June 28, 2005, 08:56:06 am » |
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My first impression of the flavour of this card was a herd of buffalo circled around the calves. One of the exterior buffalo may die, but the calves will be safe. You might make it more green in flavour and also counteract the savage tempo loss that this generates by having it be...
Sacrifice a creature: target creature [you control] can't be the target of spells or abilities until end of turn.
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« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2005, 12:04:30 am » |
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Changed, added the flavortext. Potentially makes it much weaker, but a 3/3 for 4 that trades 1 drops for other 4 drops seems strong. I have it at regenerate because it seems more in flavor, but Ephraim's image also provides for regeneration. I can see an animal sacrificing itself to let a young creature heal.
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« Reply #8 on: August 02, 2005, 04:52:50 pm » |
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Oops, I forgot to clock this. Is it too late to say 24 hour clock[/B]?
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« Reply #9 on: August 02, 2005, 05:12:33 pm » |
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Is it too late to say 24 hour clock[/B]?
It's never too late for the 24 hour clock.
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« Reply #10 on: August 02, 2005, 11:18:56 pm » |
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Seeing as this has a nice collective name, would it be a good candidate for the Pack keyword?
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« Reply #11 on: August 02, 2005, 11:46:43 pm » |
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it could easily fit the pack. Doesn't the fact that this sacrifices any creature make it seem like this should be black too? You could make the pack abilities something like this...
Pack 2 - Sacrifice a Beast: Regenerate target Beast. Pack 3 - Sacrifice a Creature: Regenerate target Beast. Pack 4 - Sacrifice a Creature: Beasts are indestructible until end of turn.
I was thinking something like...there's more beasts in play meaning they are the dominant "species". They eat all the other "species" in the "habitat" It's like Survival of the Fittest...the real thing...not the card.
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« Reply #12 on: August 03, 2005, 08:42:34 pm » |
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I'm not sure how to Pack this up - it certainly fits the flavor of the mechanic. Maybe something like this: Protective Herd - 3G Creature - Beast Pack 2: This has sacrifice a creature: Regenerate target Beast you control. 3/3 Fight one beast, fight the herd
I don't see that adding Pack warrants it. If you put multiple Packs on it you get a large tension between the other abilities and the sacrificing creatures part, which is interesting, but seems sort of suicidal.
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« Reply #13 on: August 05, 2005, 07:32:54 pm » |
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What do you think? Should it Pack or not?
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« Reply #14 on: August 06, 2005, 02:55:34 pm » |
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24 hour clock
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« Reply #15 on: August 07, 2005, 12:35:43 pm » |
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I don't like Pack here. It was fine before.
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« Reply #16 on: August 19, 2005, 10:55:05 am » |
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Closed and added[/color]
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