you also have to ask yourself how is this better then 2 Land Belcher
it falls short to pithing needle just like belcher and belcher has a consistant turn 2 win in competant hands. i aggree with asi that this could become a rebel combo deck if stuff like dark rit was added and maybe with a lot of tweaking it may become as consistant as belcher
What about protection ? Belcher is really an all-in deck in the control matchup, at least pre board, when this deck can more easily fight control matchup with a good attrition war. That said, the list posted get to much dead cards, i really aggre with all the suggestions Asi made, especially, more combo tutors and cantrip is better than serum powder, but i wouldn't remove Thirst, as it's a really strong draw engine, and you get some cards you will want to discard, even if they are not artefacts (read leylines...)
also, Colossus is a better tinker target if you keep Thirst, because not playing welder means a discarded titan gives you without any plan B tinker target.