You posted a similar decklist here:
http://www.themanadrain.com/index.php?topic=37109.0 and
Harlequin gave quite a few helpful suggestions. Otherwise you could try playing Sneak Attack which, although not necessarily tier 1 material, would be fun to play and alot less complicated.
Here's a sneak attack decklist I made a while ago, I'll take out the more expensive cards and replace them with cheaper ones.
//Lands: 19
11 Mountain
4 Badlands
4 Bloodstained Mire
//Creatures: 14
2 Sutured Ghoul
4 Kokusho, the Evening Star
4 Bogarden Hellkite
4 Nicol Bolas
//Other spells: 27
4 Chrome Mox
1 Lotus Petal
2 Mox Diamond
4 Sneak Attack
4 Rite of Flame
1 Demonic Tutor
1 Vampiric Tutor
2 Shallow Grave
4 REB
4 Skullclamp
Sideboard:
4 Pyroblast
2 Pandemonium (overkill)
1 Wheel of Fortune (when not playing against combo)
4 Duress
4 ?
You also might want to check out some old Angry Ghoul decklists too and update them for the current vintage meta:
http://www.wizards.com/Magic/Magazine/Article.aspx?x=sideboard/pthou02/hermit