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Shadow Elemental  {B}{B} Creature - Elemental Black creatures gain +1/+1 and Fear. 0/0 CURRENT WORDING:Shadow Elemental
BBB
Creature -- Elemental
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Black creatures get +1/+1 and gain Fear.
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« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2004, 03:25:38 pm » |
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Hey, not bad! Nice and simple. Oh, FYI, the power/toughness goes before the text box:
Shadow Elemental
BBB
Creature -- Elemental
0/0
Black creatures gain +1/+1 and Fear.
Also there are two hyphens in the creature type line. These are not big deals but it does save time for everyone to standardize stuff so I can just copy/paste it into the master thread.
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« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2004, 04:32:59 pm » |
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Interesting, I like this card not only because it is simple but it can be ritualed out which is always a bonus. For the casting cost and effect I think it would be ok to increase the power to a 1/1. This would be a nice addition and it doesn't seem to overpower the card. It reminds me of Ascendent Envincar just without the -1/-1 for non-black creatures. It might be cool to incorparate that somehow.
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« Reply #3 on: May 08, 2004, 12:25:07 am » |
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1BB seems fair enough as a CC.
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« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2004, 07:13:42 pm » |
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1BB seems fair enough as a CC. I think the idea is to have it be a very black creature; one that truly deserves the BBB casting cost. I like the card, although it could probably be a 1/0 |
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« Reply #5 on: May 10, 2004, 08:05:29 am » |
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This is now even better in muliples. 2 Shadow Elementals = 2 3/2 Black Creatures with fear that give all other black creatures +2/+2 and fear!
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« Reply #6 on: May 11, 2004, 12:54:33 pm » |
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24 hour clock
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« Reply #7 on: May 11, 2004, 02:58:13 pm » |
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Would it applying only to creatures you control be too good?
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« Reply #8 on: May 11, 2004, 06:23:51 pm » |
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I think it should stay the way it is and not change the ability to give juyst your creatures the bonus. IMO that would be a little to good.
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« Reply #9 on: May 16, 2004, 11:11:10 am » |
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Nitpick: Normal templating intends "get" for p/t changes, "gain" for temporarily added keyword abilities and "have" for permanently added keyword abilities (cf. [Card]Goblin King[/Card]). So you would get:
"Black creatures get +1/+1 and have fear."
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« Reply #10 on: May 17, 2004, 10:10:27 am » |
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« Reply #11 on: May 17, 2004, 08:07:09 pm » |
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Generally speaking, you don't have to worry about templating - I fix that kind of thing as I add the card to the master list. If I can't figure out a proper wording, I'll bring that up before closing the thread. Thank you for paying attention, though, and welcome to the forum!
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« Reply #12 on: May 17, 2004, 08:23:46 pm » |
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Closed and added.[/color]
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