1) Jaypee mentioned this concept is basically unplayable, because trying to build a combo engine off this card is just not strong, at all. The disruption element bogs down in the face of basics, and completely stalls out against moxen. Also, like Suicide Black, you scoop to threats.
There is this card called Pernicious Deed which tends to handle threats okay.
2) Some people have this urge to 'innovate' by trying to break ideas the popular personalities have declared to be complete garbage. While your intent to 'innovate' is a good thing, the concept needs a lot of work and is really nowhere near the state of development it should be in to be a presence in the open forums. A thread of this nature should be in Newbie, not Open.
Why would I want to post this in a Newbie thread. I posted in Open so that I can get opinions from people on what can be done with it. Maybe it is absolute garbage and should be scrapped. Maybe not. Bottom line is, by hearing other opinions, I can play around with it and find out if it will work. How will opinions from "Newbies" possibly help me. I want opinions from people that have been playing a while to combine with my knowledge of the game and the format.
You are making an assumption that because I don't choose to post a lot that I am new to Magic and/or Type 1. I am neither. Deckbuilding however, is definately not one of my better Magic skills. I do like to mess with it from time to time and if I do, who are you to say where I should post it. Frankly, I was more put off by the condescending note of your post then anything else.
JD