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« on: August 30, 2005, 02:57:32 pm » |
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Well conceptually , however not a spin on the white card. Lashing Demon 2B creature - demon When Lashing demon comes into play destroy target permanent unless its controller pays 3 life. When Lashing Demon leaves play sacrifice a permanent of target opponents choice unless you pay 3 life.
Lash me once shame on you,
Lash me twice shame on me,
Lash me thrice then damned we be.
3/3 Uncommon This just a flavorful rhyming demon that will usually amount to 3 life loss for you , 3 life loss to an opponent and one or two cards loss to an opponent ( in limited anyway) (and now that i think about it is kind of pox like neato  ). Maybe the riggers should be reversed though not sure. current wording Lashing Demon
2BB
creature - demon
When Lashing demon comes into play sacrifice a permanent of targets opponents choice unless you pay 3 life.
When Lashing Demon leaves play destroy target permanent unless its controller pays 3 life.
Lash me once shame on you,
Lash me twice shame on me,
Lash me thrice then damned we be.
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UncommonBeen here a day any one have any comments? Some one has to. |
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« Last Edit: September 01, 2005, 05:58:47 pm by silvernail »
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« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2005, 10:01:21 am » |
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The CIP ability is a lot stronger than the LP ability, simply because there are likely to be more permanents out when this dies than there are when it CIPs. I'd much rather see the abilities switched--a 3/3 for 3 is good enough without bolting your opponent when it CIPs.
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« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2005, 03:51:17 pm » |
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You should cost this at 2BB at least, since black 3/3's for three usually have a drawback and this is hardly considered a drawback.
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« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2005, 05:20:18 pm » |
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any more comments or should we clock it?
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« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2005, 08:14:58 pm » |
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I like it. Go ahead.
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« Reply #5 on: September 02, 2005, 08:18:58 pm » |
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I have a slight problem with the abilities arranged this way. The way it was before, it was too powerful when coming into play. The way it is now, it discourages creature removal. Obviously, not much since it's 3 damage a turn or a one-time payment of 3 life. Nonetheless, being black is already discouragement enough, since there are still numerous black removal spells that won't hit black creatures. I would feel much more comfortable with this card if it had just a CIP abiliyty or just a LP ability that causes both players to sacrifice or pay life.
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« Reply #6 on: September 02, 2005, 09:19:55 pm » |
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At 3/3 for 2BB with a drawback, it should have something to compensate. A decent leaves play ability seems fine to me.
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« Reply #7 on: September 03, 2005, 12:09:55 am » |
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Oops. I didn't see that he had increased the cost to   {B}. I was still operating under the notion that this costed . I reckon it's fine as-is, then. |
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« Reply #8 on: September 03, 2005, 11:55:17 pm » |
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tick..tick...tick clock is running 24 hours and counting
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« Reply #9 on: September 14, 2005, 03:46:50 pm » |
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did any one lock this and add it yet...looks like no so its time has passed and it can be added now.
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« Reply #10 on: September 14, 2005, 03:56:48 pm » |
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You need to send a PM to the mods to have them add it. See the card creation rules.
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« Reply #11 on: September 18, 2005, 09:45:33 pm » |
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Closed and added.[/color]
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