|
Nazdakka
|
 |
« on: September 11, 2006, 01:27:27 pm » |
|
Midfield General (playtest name) 1W Creature - Soldier Vigilance Whenever ~this~ deals damage, you gain that much life 1/3
What do we think - is this an ok common for limited? It's not good enough for constructed, but this is a rock solid defensive guy.
Current Wording:
Vec Commander 1W Creature - Soldier Vigilance Whenever Vec Commander deals combat damage, you gain that much life. A good commander is the first into battle and the last to retreat. A great commander does it with a smile in his heart and a spring in his step. 1/3
Changelog 9/11 - Added combat-damage only clause. 20/11 - Added flavour text and an idea for the name 01/04 - New name.
|
|
|
|
« Last Edit: April 02, 2007, 02:10:38 pm by Nazdakka »
|
Logged
|
Nazdakka Arcbound Ravager is MY Fairy Godmother! Check out Battle of the Sets - Group 1&2 results now up!
|
|
|
|
parallax
|
 |
« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2006, 01:31:18 pm » |
|
This guy's great. Not much to say about him, though. Seems balanced compared to Courier Hawk, trading flying for a point of toughness and Spirit Link.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
How about choosing a non-legend creature? Otherwise he is a UG instant Wrath of Frog.
|
|
|
|
zeus-online
|
 |
« Reply #2 on: September 11, 2006, 02:13:17 pm » |
|
Uncommon i think....not common.
/Zeus
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
The truth is an elephant described by three blind men.
|
|
|
|
Nazdakka
|
 |
« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2006, 02:21:11 pm » |
|
Uncommon i think....not common.
/Zeus
Why? Sure he's strong, but too strong for common? Would you take this guy over high-end commons like Pacifism or Master Decoy?
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Nazdakka Arcbound Ravager is MY Fairy Godmother! Check out Battle of the Sets - Group 1&2 results now up!
|
|
|
|
zeus-online
|
 |
« Reply #4 on: September 11, 2006, 03:14:06 pm » |
|
No i wouldn't, its just that those abilities combined would probably go on an uncommon unless it was horribly overcosted.
/Zeus
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
The truth is an elephant described by three blind men.
|
|
|
|
parallax
|
 |
« Reply #5 on: September 11, 2006, 05:22:07 pm » |
|
No i wouldn't, its just that those abilities combined would probably go on an uncommon unless it was horribly overcosted.
/Zeus
Mourning Thrull. I think this is fine.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
How about choosing a non-legend creature? Otherwise he is a UG instant Wrath of Frog.
|
|
|
|
jro
|
 |
« Reply #6 on: September 11, 2006, 09:27:57 pm » |
|
This is also Skyhunter Prowler - flying + Spirit Link - 1cc. I think a bigger concern than some abstract notion of balance is whether the limited format can handle this. This card would be a house in any limited format that relies on 2 power 2 drops. It's not that easy getting a creature with 3 power in limited. Chances are, you wouldn't be able to productively swing into this guy until turn 5. And he's always going to be able to swing if you went first and it's your turn 3.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
parallax
|
 |
« Reply #7 on: September 11, 2006, 09:48:44 pm » |
|
This is also Skyhunter Prowler - flying + Spirit Link - 1cc. I think a bigger concern than some abstract notion of balance is whether the limited format can handle this. This card would be a house in any limited format that relies on 2 power 2 drops. It's not that easy getting a creature with 3 power in limited. Chances are, you wouldn't be able to productively swing into this guy until turn 5. And he's always going to be able to swing if you went first and it's your turn 3.
You have a good point here, but that only applies to bear-focused limited environments. It's hard to judge cards that are meant to be limited commons here in the Card Creation Forum as we have no context for the cards. We're focused on individual cards. We can't know what kind of environment the cards would end up in. I've been saying this a lot lately, but this is a development issue. In a limited format with plentiful removal and/or evasion, or one that cares more about Hill Giants or flank Knights, this guy is fine at common. If the format is two-drop--based, then development will move this guy to uncommon or increase the cost to  .
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
How about choosing a non-legend creature? Otherwise he is a UG instant Wrath of Frog.
|
|
|
|
Nazdakka
|
 |
« Reply #8 on: September 12, 2006, 08:33:28 am » |
|
This is also Skyhunter Prowler - flying + Spirit Link - 1cc. I think a bigger concern than some abstract notion of balance is whether the limited format can handle this. This card would be a house in any limited format that relies on 2 power 2 drops. It's not that easy getting a creature with 3 power in limited. Chances are, you wouldn't be able to productively swing into this guy until turn 5. And he's always going to be able to swing if you went first and it's your turn 3.
You have a good point here, but that only applies to bear-focused limited environments. It's hard to judge cards that are meant to be limited commons here in the Card Creation Forum as we have no context for the cards. We're focused on individual cards. We can't know what kind of environment the cards would end up in. I've been saying this a lot lately, but this is a development issue. In a limited format with plentiful removal and/or evasion, or one that cares more about Hill Giants or flank Knights, this guy is fine at common. If the format is two-drop--based, then development will move this guy to uncommon or increase the cost to  . Absolutely. In a vacuum, this is an excellent defensive creature, but the context will determines how useful that is. In Ravinca block? He'd be all right, but it's a fairly slow format and so most decks will either have answers or better things to do. But in a tempo format defined by Grizzly Bears or Gray Ogres (aka Invasion or Onslaught blocks)? He'd be a house, because he's be just what you need to buy time against an onrushing horde. We can always kill/nerf him in development if he proves a problem as currently written.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Nazdakka Arcbound Ravager is MY Fairy Godmother! Check out Battle of the Sets - Group 1&2 results now up!
|
|
|
|
Nazdakka
|
 |
« Reply #9 on: September 13, 2006, 08:37:52 am » |
|
Needs a name and flavour text. Anyone?
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Nazdakka Arcbound Ravager is MY Fairy Godmother! Check out Battle of the Sets - Group 1&2 results now up!
|
|
|
|
Godder
|
 |
« Reply #10 on: September 13, 2006, 09:11:21 pm » |
|
Limited environments are almost always Bear and Gray Ogre oriented. This guy is a house because he deals damage when attacks and blocks, and Vigilance will see him doing both a lot.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
That's what I like about you, Laura - you're always willing to put my neck on the line.
|
|
|
|
Anusien
|
 |
« Reply #11 on: September 15, 2006, 03:53:15 pm » |
|
At 1/3 I wouldn't make him a general. Lieutenant? Commander? A good commander is the first into battle and the last to retreat. A great commander does it with a smile in his heart and a spring in his step.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Magic Level 3 Judge Southern USA Regional Coordinator The urge to save humanity is almost always a false front for the urge to rule.
|
|
|
|
Nazdakka
|
 |
« Reply #12 on: September 20, 2006, 11:40:10 am » |
|
Oops, my reply on this got lost when we went back to the backups.
I like the flavour text, especially the way it links in with both Vigilance and Spirit Link, I'm just having trouble with the name. We can't really use 'Midfield General' as a name - it's a soccer reference (a Midfield General is a defensive midfield player who co-ordinates for the defense and supports the players further foward).
How about "Grizzled Sergeant"? Is the idea of a sergeant with "a smile in his heart and a spring in his step" ok, or do we need to give him a promotion?
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Nazdakka Arcbound Ravager is MY Fairy Godmother! Check out Battle of the Sets - Group 1&2 results now up!
|
|
|
|
Nazdakka
|
 |
« Reply #13 on: September 25, 2006, 09:03:44 am » |
|
Clock.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Nazdakka Arcbound Ravager is MY Fairy Godmother! Check out Battle of the Sets - Group 1&2 results now up!
|
|
|
Matt
Post like a butterfly, Mod like a bee.
Moderator
Basic User
    
Posts: 2297
King of the Jews!
|
 |
« Reply #14 on: September 25, 2006, 07:31:12 pm » |
|
It's not "seargant" that doesn't go with smiles and lightness of boot, but "grizzled."
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
http://www.goodgamery.com/pmo/c025.GIF---------------------- SpenceForHire2k7: Its unessisary SpenceForHire2k7: only spelled right SpenceForHire2k7: <= world english teach evar ---------------------- noitcelfeRmaeT {Team Hindsight}
|
|
|
|
Nazdakka
|
 |
« Reply #15 on: April 01, 2007, 12:06:07 pm » |
|
Loooong bump here, but I just thought about this card and thought I would come back to it. No point making a new thread. All he needed was a name and I think I have one:
Vec Commander 1W Creature - Soldier Vigilance Whenever ~this~ deals combat damage, you gain that much life. A good leader is the first into battle and the last to retreat. A meandeck leader does it with a smile in his heart and a spring in his step. 1/3
Are we still OK with this?
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Nazdakka Arcbound Ravager is MY Fairy Godmother! Check out Battle of the Sets - Group 1&2 results now up!
|
|
|
|
Anusien
|
 |
« Reply #16 on: April 02, 2007, 08:46:46 am » |
|
Word filter fun going on? Other than some minor layout issues (I'm assumign you're gonna replace ~this~ with Vec Command and remove "A meandeck leader", I like it, although I have no idea what a Vec commander is.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Magic Level 3 Judge Southern USA Regional Coordinator The urge to save humanity is almost always a false front for the urge to rule.
|
|
|
|
Nazdakka
|
 |
« Reply #17 on: April 03, 2007, 01:07:48 pm » |
|
I picked a race from Magic history which sounded good. See Vec Townships and the various en-/il-vec. The one problem is that he hasn't got an affiliation (IIRC en-Vec were the loyalists, il-Vec the rebels), which will look a bit strange. How about Commander en-Vec? Clashes a little with Commander Greven il-Vec, so maybe I need to think again.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Nazdakka Arcbound Ravager is MY Fairy Godmother! Check out Battle of the Sets - Group 1&2 results now up!
|
|
|
|
Darkenslight
|
 |
« Reply #18 on: April 04, 2007, 08:14:00 am » |
|
What about the name Korvecdal Commander, with a quote by Eladamri:
"Even the greatest of leaders must delegate duties sometimes." -Eladamri, Lord of Leaves.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Ephraim
|
 |
« Reply #19 on: April 27, 2007, 11:37:36 am » |
|
I picked a race from Magic history which sounded good. See Vec Townships and the various en-/il-vec. The one problem is that he hasn't got an affiliation (IIRC en-Vec were the loyalists, il-Vec the rebels), which will look a bit strange. How about Commander en-Vec? Clashes a little with Commander Greven il-Vec, so maybe I need to think again.
Is it strictly necessary for him to be a Commander? There are numerous ranks or titles that you could give him to avoid conflict with Greven, while still maintaining the en-Vec designation. Trooper en-Vec Infantry en-Vec Marshall en-Vec
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Did you know that Red is the color or art and music and passion? Combine that with Green, the color of nature, spiritualism, and community and you get a hippie commune of drum circles, dreamcatchers, and recreational drug use. Let's see that win a Pro Tour.
|
|
|
|