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« Reply #30 on: July 24, 2005, 12:34:50 pm »

Sorry for the double post, but I think it is time for the....24 hour clock.
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« Reply #31 on: August 02, 2005, 12:47:10 pm »

These are totally sweet, but I don't love the flavor texts. Could we get them to parallel each other or connect more?
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« Reply #32 on: August 02, 2005, 02:12:21 pm »

Jacob, I tried to make the flavor text explain what exactly the Vow is in each case. How do you envision the flavor texts looking? I'd be very interested in seeing that.
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« Reply #33 on: August 02, 2005, 03:05:44 pm »

Here's a fragment of Shakespeare's "The Passionate Pilgrim" (http://www.readbookonline.net/readOnLine/456/).
Every 2 lines could become a flavor text.

My vow was earthly, thou a heavenly love:
Thy grace being gain'd cures all disgrace in me.
My vow was breath, and breath a vapour is;
Then, thou fair sun, that on this earth doth shine,
Exhale this vapour vow; in thee it is:
If broken, then it is no fault of mine.
If by me broke, what fool is not so wise
To break an oath, to win a paradise?


Perhaps like this:

Vow of Poverty
My vow was earthly, thou a heavenly love:
Thy grace being gain'd cures all disgrace in me.

Vow of Seclusion
My vow was breath, and breath a vapour is;
Then, thou fair sun, that on this earth doth shine,

Vow of Eternal Servitude
Exhale this vapour vow; in thee it is:
If broken, then it is no fault of mine.

Vow of Brotherhood
If by me broke, what fool is not so wise
To break an oath, to win a paradise?


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« Reply #34 on: August 05, 2005, 12:28:52 pm »

Closed and added.[/color]
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