The green one make your guys HUGE, does stupid things with umezawa's jitte, makes those opponent discards a card when you attack guys brutal, and the tribal guy probably shuts off too much design space (trigger on attack stuff in that tribe becomes impossible).
Hi Liam
Are you referring to the original version or to the 'Printed P/T' version of the green dude? I think that the stat boosters issue can be solved with the second version. I accept that the initial version was well above acceptable power levels. I tend to start with a wow idea and try to work it down to an acceptably playable level. I don't get the discard a card reference.
With regard to the White version, apart from the current crop of Kithkin, what tribe/class has a large number of trigger on attack abilities? It's certainly not an area that R&D have gone into in much depth, though you are correct in saying that it would severly limit that possibility in the chosen tribe/class. I don't think it's such a loss (outside of Kithkin) for the moment.
Also, you can't really go with "Card Printed" either. In power and toughness, it's less dangerous than other things, but look at card like Mishrah's factory, morph creatures, and anything that creates tokens... they would have undefined power.
Yeah, this is a problem but is currently the only way I can word it to get the effect i want on creature
cards. Token issues could be solved by the insertion of "non-token" in the "
Double Strike" and, most likely, the "
Creature's power" lines. It makes it more wordy but it's obvious that the text needs work. Do you have a suggestion for a workaround that avoids "
printed"?
Your most recent adaptation is equally ludicrous because it is effectively errataing a single card in consideration to this deck. No card should specifically negate ONE other card. For instance, no where in magic is there a card that says "Blue instants that cost 1 mana draw you one less card."

Why, thank you!
While 'Goyf was a consideration for this card being changed from it's basic inception, it's no less an excellent card because it's not broken. I think 'Goyf was mentioned as an extreme example of the effect that's nonetheless likely to be a common event if this card were ever to see play.
What exactly is ludicrous (I'll accept the "equally" as a mild rebuke at my penchant for starting a card at a high powerlevel before reining it in to playable levels!) about this version? That it's been made less overpowered? Hardly. 'Goyf, the
errata'ed card (lol), will still be excellent regardless of whether something like what I'm proposing was ever made.
For all the games where 'Goyf isn't present, Camoflaged Hunter makes your 1cc & 2cc dudes hit twice. "Blue instants that cost 1 mana draw you one less card" is a dead card against almost every deck.
Thanks for the feedback guys. Keep it coming!